[MJQ3690]

VocalLife Episode 1 (Oh Music)

The first episode of the series "VocalLife"
but it is short..
in the second episode to the end...
will be long like the other anime series..

Rin & Len Still not yet appear in this episode.
they will appear maybe in the next episode.

if you want to help and make it better..
just send a message..

[halfcrazy]

That’s was pretty good, I’m used to them talking in Japanese so took me back a bit at first but the English pronunciation was good.

Animation was solid too, noticed a few little problems and timing issues but nothing major, most likely stuff someone that doesn’t work in the animation field wouldn’t notice. Overall though it was good.

Grammar on the subtitles needed a little work. Typically an i on its own is capitalized. I’m not the greatest English wise but I’m sure us lot here would help with that, if not then I don’t mind helping out.

Can’t wait for part 2.

[Sappokei]

I think perhaps you should get models of the same style, like how Len and Rin are different, which is most notable in these two as they have the same hair colour. As well, I think Miku sounds like she's trying to hard/talking to high-pitched. At some parts where her voice was a bit lower when she was singing, that sounded like her default voice (specifically 4:19)

Anyway, yeah, apart from the model differences and Miku's voice, I think it's all okay~ Keep up the good work, and if not already, you should upload to NND, you're gonna certainly receive some attention there~

[sleepysheep7]

Well, it was interesting but not exactly my cup of tea. But like what Sappy said, You should get models that are consistent ( Especially for Luka, KAITO and Len they are the odd balls ). Have you thought about maybe ripping the models from Project Diva? Also is this just going to focus on Crypton or are you going to expand to other companies like PowerFx and Internet Co?