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[Song Lyrics] Forever Was Yesterday (And Never is The Future) Wrote a song ... :3 Any/All feedback would be loved.
Posted 09 September 2011 - 03:37 AM
I wrote a song with a friend about losing someone. You can kinda tell what parts i wrote cus i rhymed a lot. XD o3o Im working on it with vocaloid but would love any feedback. If anyone would be kind enough to maybe translate it to japanese then please do so. :3 I also don't know weather the song should be slow or fast paced. :3 I have a basic idea but as I said. I love any and all feedback/comments.
Posted 24 November 2011 - 12:19 PM
I see you posted this back in September and have had no comments which is a shame. I think your lyrics are excellent. If I was orchestrating this piece, I would make the verses slow and use major keys falling to minor keys - lyrical and soft. Then I would introduce the chorus with a short strong drum solo (half a bar) and increase the 'movement' of the music while keeping the singing slow on top. Huge impact. What I mean by increasing the 'movement' is that during the verse you would use chords or minims and semi-breves; during the chorus, switch to crotchets and quavers and even increase the tempo. Then revert back to slow music. Hope this helps.
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