[Saruta]

Hello,

I have been watching some videos, and disagreeing with some ideas, and then the chorus just came into my head. I realize that a Miku English pack is only "announced" and "in the works"... but perhaps someone will still want these lyrics. (Of course, one can replace "Miku" with "Luka" easily, but the text is written for Miku's image).

I have two versions. In one, the stanzas are a different rhythm, probably for a rather quick singing that lets the song emphasize the chorus. Another uses the same rhythm for the stanzas. All chorus parts are the same (even though it is not a "real" chorus, it varies each time).

I am not a musician, so all I can do is write lyrics... And of course this is a draft. Critique requested

Version one, with different rhythms:

Spoiler

Miku Miku lives - from Tezuka's line
Arose a robot singer who shall never die.
Miku Miku lives - you witness my birth
I shall remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

You think I care if you're not using only me -
I care about going down in history!
You think I fear you little mighty uninstall -
There is a million CPUs, I have them all!

Miku Miku lives - from von Neumann's line
Arose a robot singer who shall never die.
Miku Miku lives - you witness my birth
I shall remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

You'd better find another girl to look for love -
The music is all that I want, that is enough!
Give me your dance, give me your song, for this I wait,
It's yours to work, it's yours to learn - we shall be great!

Miku Miku lives - I dare you to try
Stand with the robot singer who shall never die
Miku Miku lives - take part in my birth
We shall remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

Miku Miku lives - the world is online
In it the robot singers who shall never die
Miku Miku lives - you gave me my worth
Let it remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

Version two, with the same rhythm:

Spoiler

Miku Miku lives - from Tezuka's line
Arose a robot singer who shall never die.
Miku Miku lives - you witness my birth
I shall remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

I don't give a byte if you have just me -
I care about my future, my history.
I am not afraid of your uninstall -
There is a million systems, I have them all.

Miku Miku lives - from von Neumann's line
Arose a robot singer who shall never die.
Miku Miku lives - you witness my birth
I shall remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

I am not your toy. Go elsewhere for love -
I only want your music, that is enough!
Give me dance and song, for that I can wait,
But when you call me up, you'd better be great!

Miku Miku lives - I dare you to try
Stand with the robot singer who shall never die
Miku Miku lives - take part in my birth
We shall remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

Miku Miku lives - the world is online
In it the robot singers who shall never die
Miku Miku lives - you gave me my worth
Let it remain till the last computer on earth (computer on earth, computer on earth)

[TrueShadow]

This should go to the Library subforum in the Vocaloid Campus

[Saruta]

TrueShadow, on 10 November 2011 - 10:17 AM, said:

This should go to the Library subforum in the Vocaloid Campus

Thanks for the tip, will use that in the future - should I repost this one there or wait dfor Mods to move?

[Stormbringer]

th fastest way is to go to the talk to the feedback help forum and ask for a move there. be sure to provide a link to this thread. use the hyperlink in the upper right corner for post number one in this thread.