[Wiguan]

One of my way of writing is to absorbed into other people songs to get the feeling, vibe and emotional state to write a lyric.

Today, this is the song that I use.

Listen on Soundcloud.com

I'll probably produce the same genre and the same mood, just altering the melody while the chord progression will still the same. (Well depends)

This song will be for Sonika
I don't even have the right title yet.

So here it is.

Quote

Verses:

Looking at the sky,
Putting all my hope upon the wind,
I don't know if they will,
Coming true one day.

Never mind, I'm happy now,
With what I have today,
To have a person like you,
Near, inside my heart.

Bridge:

There might be some times,
I'll doubting you.
But you are always there,
Inside my heart.

There might be some day,
I'll cry 'coz of you.
I promise that my feeling,
Won't fade away from you.

Chorus:

'Coz my love for you is true.
Never ever changing.
I will treasure you alone,
No one else inside my heart.

Even the days you're not here,
I will always waiting.
Looking at the empty street,
Till the day that we will meet again.


Bridge 2:

I will waiting for you, here.
No matter how long it will be.
'Coz after all, you're the reason of my life.

Expecting constructive critics.

[Alteria]

I think if you use "will", you won't need "-ing".

[Wiguan]

Alteria, on 09 January 2012 - 09:19 PM, said:

I think if you use "will", you won't need "-ing".

Ah, you are right.