[Nyx]

I was unsure where to put this. Mods, feel free to move it if I placed the thread in the wrong place.

I was planning on making a new fanmade vocaloid, and I would love to have some opinions or criticism on it. Feel free to post as much criticism as you want, I want to make it as good as possible, and criticism always helps. If you think there's anything I should change to make it look better, please tell me.

I haven't done so much yet, just her head is done. More to come.

Picture:
(sorry for bad quality, picture is taken with my laptops webcam, since that was the only camera alivable. will probably update to a better later)

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Apperance (in detalis)

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She have light blue hair, with darker highlights. The tips are purple. She have long, curly hair in a pony tail on the right side of the head. The pony tail is held together by a small red and brown flower accessory. She have a scar on her forehead. Her right eye is light blue and her left eye is light brown from birth. She have a scar that's crossing her nose, and the edge of her mouth, which she is ashamed of, so she uses a mask to cover it.

Background history + facts

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She is 14 years old and have had a secret crush on Len Kagamine since she first saw him. Her character item is a 4-pointed hira shuriken (throwing star) and she is training to become a ninja. She have loved ninjas all her life, and loves the training. She is good at playing the violin, and using most ninja weapons. She loves to sneak around outside (and scare people) when it's dark. She is a jealous girl, and usually stalks poeple who is paired up with Len (Rin is her favorite victim).

[husky]

i like the design so far. it should be good when its finished.

[Nyx]

Thanks

[husky]

your welcome. but i want to here it first. if you make any songs.

[Nyx]

Well, I'm not good at writing songs, so she'll mostly do covers of other songs...

[Erebus]

She's very cute idk why your beating yourself up over her. But you must complete the design I wanna see the full picture. :3

[Nyx]

Ok

[Micah]

haha Len has a stalker.
This might be my new favorite fanmade vocaloid
Sorry Haku...

[husky]

lol. well it was obvious if kll made one it would be in love with len. (poke at kll's username), *bark* (love you)

[Nyx]

Micah, on 29 January 2012 - 11:34 PM, said:

haha Len has a stalker.
This might be my new favorite fanmade vocaloid
Sorry Haku...

Haha thanks
Yep, Len now have a stalker... xD

[Erebus]

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[Nyx]

Can't see it... Try the IMG code... Usually works for me

[Erebus]

http://

I DID IT!! YES IT WORKED!!!

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[Nyx]

Yay~ now it finally worked~ Thanks~

[husky]

At least len looks happy. i doubt he would say no to any girl who stalks him.