[Sena]

(Reader's Note: I wrote this as it came to me, this is only a section of what is currently adrift in my mind. Please give me feedback on what I can do to improve. Thank You!)

• K-on! Fan Fiction
  
• Characters: Azusa & Other various characters

It was some time in December. The school was getting ready for the Christmas show, everyone was busy, just as they were for the previous years, pupils scurrying around running errands for teachers. Yeah, just like last year. Azusa Nanako, now a senior at the school, wasn't where she was last year, It brings back to many memories. Instead she was sat outside wearing the scarf Yui-Senpai had once put on Azusa in the cold. She reached inside her bag and pulled out her lunch, it was filled with nice warm food for this weather, exactly what she needed. As she went to put the lunch box back in her bag however, something caught her eye from inside her bag.
"This is...from back then.."

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"Put them on!" Ritsu shouted, with quite a temper in her voice, clenching hold of the Maid outfit headband, which seemed to match the Maid Outfit they already forced Mio to wear. Mio slid along the floor infront of the door to their music room.
"I'd rather die!" She replied holding her hands to her chest and shaking her hair. A hand suddenly appeared on Mio's shoulder, a voice whispered in her ear: "That can be arranged." Mio's eyes popped open and she didn't even turn round, she had frozen to the spot out of fear.
"Sawa-chan!" Ritsu called out, a smile appearing on her face. "But...er...look at what you did to her.." Sawako, the 'light music clubs' adviser, was stood with her hand on Mio's shoulder, she was also smiling.
"Oops, was that me again?" The rest of the girls started laughing, even Azusa started laughing.

It had been a while since Azusa had laughed like she had on that day. It was the smallest thing that made her laugh aswell, something only the membors of the Houkago Teatime will ever understand.

A little while later, everything had settled down, and the members of the Light Music Club had gone back to their usual setting of 'having a break'. Out infront of them were biscuits, cakes, scones, and 6 cups of green tea which Mugi had especially bought for this break. Azusa, however wasn't as hungry and thirsty as the other girls, and hadn't touched anything on the table.
"Azunyan?" Yui said, somehow snuggling up to Azusa. Azusa stopped staring at her tea and looked at Yui. Yui smiled and opened out her hand. Resting on the palm of her hand was a small pink ribbon with black outer stitching. She took Azusa's hand and opened it out and placed the ribbon very carefully into her palm and closed it. "We all have one in different colors!" Without even realizing, Mio, Ritsu, Mugi and Yui were all holding their ribbon out, showing Azusa they all did have one.
"Where did you..-" Azusa started.
"When you were ill a few weeks back we all got some of this, as a sort of remembrance thing, after all, we graduate in about a month and, yeah, we'll still see each other but it's nice to have things like this!" Ritsu said chirpily.

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"That's right...That was exactly a month before they graduated" Azusa said holding the ribbon in the same way Yui had given it to her. "I haven't forgotten our promise..."




Well, that's it so far. I have no idea where that will fit in, but it just came to me. I'm of course going to change various things (eg. the ribbon to another item) but apart from little things please tell me if it was okay. Looking for creative criticism here guys!

[turntechBiologist]

I for one really enjoyed your story!
I found one part that didn't make much sense to me but now I can't find it...
But one thing one could do is read it backwards, that might help you find any mistakes.

Good Luck! :3