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Just a small thing for school. Because I'm the only one who uses Vocaloid for school. ;_;.

I know it sucks but it was originally a test for harmony's (since I've never actually made Harmonies before)and her English but then I just changed it up for school purposes... And than I thought I might as well post it...Regrets will come later, but for now, try to enjoy c:>

[Kit Wistful]

Hahahaha, I think the harmonies need a lot of work ^__^;;; I don't know if the dissonance was intentional (in some places, like the beeping bits, I think it's suitable) but in the main lyrics it was just hard to listen to! )o___o);;;; (0:30-50 is the most painful ).____.);;; )

Other than that I like the lyrics and the instrumental line (damn I gotta learn some terminologies, I liked the "off vocal" as well is what I'm trying to say), and the way they were timed/dynamicized. Her english isn't easily understandable, but after listening for a bit I got a feel for what she was saying! : O And that last "please come home" was just ;_______; bravvoooooooooooooooooooo

(considering that I only understand natively english western songs sung by humans 1/2 of the time I think that's pretty darned good : P)

I feel it is 1 or 2 stars above "it sucks" and I think it would be cool to see after some work! I mean hear it. One hears sounds.

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Kit Wistful, on 19 February 2012 - 09:28 AM, said:

Hahahaha, I think the harmonies need a lot of work ^__^;;; I don't know if the dissonance was intentional (in some places, like the beeping bits, I think it's suitable) but in the main lyrics it was just hard to listen to! )o___o);;;; (0:30-50 is the most painful ).____.);;; )

Other than that I like the lyrics and the instrumental line (damn I gotta learn some terminologies, I liked the "off vocal" as well is what I'm trying to say), and the way they were timed/dynamicized. Her english isn't easily understandable, but after listening for a bit I got a feel for what she was saying! : O And that last "please come home" was just ;_______; bravvoooooooooooooooooooo

(considering that I only understand natively english western songs sung by humans 1/2 of the time I think that's pretty darned good : P)

I feel it is 1 or 2 stars above "it sucks" and I think it would be cool to see after some work! I mean hear it. One hears sounds.

Yeah, the harmonies were sort of meh, I've never made my own harmonies before and I thought why not put it to the test? xD
Her English is meh, I understood her (I guess because I know what she's supposed to be saying I guess xD), if there's any part that you really don't understand, may I know which? /w\

Thanks for the feedback by the way! ^^

[Kit Wistful]

This is what I heard on the third or fourth listen-through:

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please come home

look at you (something)

You've been gone for 8 months

(please, please)

Talk to me because I love you

I need you, where are you, I miss you

(tik, tik) (beep, beep (or leave?)) (um, um (or home?))

please come home

And I can understand how hard it is to do harmonies. I have pretty much no musical education, and running off of intuition is haaardd )o__o);;

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Kit Wistful, on 19 February 2012 - 11:20 AM, said:

This is what I heard on the third or fourth listen-through:






And I can understand how hard it is to do harmonies. I have pretty much no musical education, and running off of intuition is haaardd )o__o);;

"Look at your daugther"
oh lol, those tiks, beeps, ect were supposed to say "Take me on" but I split them up for some reason ;~;
But I'm taking note of this!
Hehe, tell me about it, it's only a miracle I made the instrumental xD (Self taught most of this)