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Please Critique my Concept art

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Posted 28 February 2012 - 04:53 PM

Hello everyone. I have started working on an UTAU voicebank named Jade and I would love some feedback on her design. I know the image is really washed out, my camera hates me at the moment. I am really attached to her wearing green to go with her name, and I am also attached to her either wearing a dress or a classy skirt. Other than that I am open to change, and I just want to make sure I know what to tell an artist to change when I commission Jade's finally design.

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Edit: I agree the dress she's in now doesn't stand out. What about this dress?
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Posted 28 February 2012 - 05:32 PM

I was just thinking : Instead of a green dress make her hair green? It still involves green which attaches to the UTAU's name? But you did say you wanted her to wear green which is understandable.
If you could, maybe make the dress more 'fluffier' depending on whether her voice is bold, and elegant, or if it's not that, maybe keep the dress the same but shorter? Or thinner? Again, the hair could be changed depending on the style of her voice, maybe to show off what sort of voice she has. Elegant would be straighter or tied up into a bob to show the elegance of the UTAU.

I don't know what else to say really, it's quite a good design, I'm just trying to offer friendly criticism. :3
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Posted 28 February 2012 - 08:20 PM

I like it~ What's that decoration in her hair? The picture's a bit washed out as you said. I like her hairstyle but I think her dress is a bit too plain. Maybe google prom dresses or something for ideas? Something a bit more memorable would be nice--as it stands, the dress is very basic.

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Posted 28 February 2012 - 08:47 PM

I think the dress should be a big lighter, so a kind of minty light colour but the hue can be changed. Perhaps shorter, say knee length, also some doily-like deco at the rim. Also, it would look good if it grew bigger at the waist. You can't go much more detailed though because otherwise it would call for a colour scheme, and then there's the case with the hair being the only thing of it's colour, etc etc.

Anyway good work, I'm looking forward to see it all elegant and such
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Posted 28 February 2012 - 10:28 PM

View PostAlphonse, on 28 February 2012 - 03:26 PM, said:

I like it~ What's that decoration in her hair? The picture's a bit washed out as you said. I like her hairstyle but I think her dress is a bit too plain. Maybe google prom dresses or something for ideas? Something a bit more memorable would be nice--as it stands, the dress is very basic.

The hair decoration is three flowers. Thanks for the ideas, being memorable would be a good thing seeing how many UTAU voice banks there are
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