[Transient Mirage]

tei's VCV cover of Sakurane please tell me what you think about it. i think it turned out pretty good.

[Fragments]

I think it would be a very nice cover, if not for the weird fuzzy sound over Tei's voice. I don't know how to describe it, but it seriously detracts from the song as a whole. Good work, otherwise.

[Transient Mirage]

Fragments, on 01 March 2012 - 08:37 PM, said:

if not for the weird fuzzy sound over Tei's voice.

thanks the truth is i have no idea how the sound got like that i think when Sony Vegas was rendering it it messed the sound up i may edit the video and re-upload it sometime in the future.

[AyuRox]

The wierd fuzzy sound is clipping/peaking. If you were working in Audacity at all and you noticed the red sections in the vocal track, that's clipping. Its bad and you want to avoid it at all costs. And just because each individual track may not have clipping doesn't mean the whole thing won't. In Audacity, to make sure the whole thing doesn't have clipping overall, play the track and watch the output monitor at the top (the 2 bars at the top with the little speaker icon next to them.) If at any point the turn red and there's a small red line on the right of one or both of the bars, then the exported audio will be clipped, even though you don't hear it in the playback.

Also, the timing is horribly off in the middle and at the end. Tei ends up being almost a whole beat off of the music. If you did the vocals in parts (i.e, first verse, first chorus, second verse etc. all separate) then make sure you have the timing right in all the sections. If you worked with her vocals as a whole, then your UST has a tempo problem, because its fine at the beginning but off at the end. But then again, that wouldn't be your fault since its not your UST.

And as for the tuning, well, like i said, its not your UST, so there's really nothing to say about it unless you edited it in some way, which I doubt. Nothing against you, but 99% of the time when someone uses someone else UST or VSQ, they just plug & chug

Also, UTAU covers belong in the UTAU Tribune. The Tribune inside the Campus is for VOCALOID works only. I'll ask a mod to move it for you.

[Transient Mirage]

AyuRox, on 01 March 2012 - 09:26 PM, said:

The wierd fuzzy sound is clipping/peaking. If you were working in Audacity at all and you noticed the red sections in the vocal track, that's clipping. Its bad and you want to avoid it at all costs. And just because each individual track may not have clipping doesn't mean the whole thing won't. In Audacity, to make sure the whole thing doesn't have clipping overall, play the track and watch the output monitor at the top (the 2 bars at the top with the little speaker icon next to them.) If at any point the turn red and there's a small red line on the right of one or both of the bars, then the exported audio will be clipped, even though you don't hear it in the playback.

Also, the timing is horribly off in the middle and at the end. Tei ends up being almost a whole beat off of the music. If you did the vocals in parts (i.e, first verse, first chorus, second verse etc. all separate) then make sure you have the timing right in all the sections. If you worked with her vocals as a whole, then your UST has a tempo problem, because its fine at the beginning but off at the end. But then again, that wouldn't be your fault since its not your UST.

And as for the tuning, well, like i said, its not your UST, so there's really nothing to say about it unless you edited it in some way, which I doubt. Nothing against you, but 99% of the time when someone uses someone else UST or VSQ, they just plug & chug

thanks for the tips bu like i said the original mp3 did not have that weird fuzzy noise it must have gotten messed up in sony vegas it tends to do stuff like that now and then. and thanks for telling me about the tempo i think i will just reupload it with a fixed music file and ill try my best to fix the tempo. i was kinda in a rush the morning i made this so its no wonder it sucks =.= i always new when i was listning to this the tempo sounded off at one point but i never noticed any other points.

[Kangaroo]

Still sounds great despite the small problems.