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【Makune Hachi】Crystal Heart【UTAU Original】 First attempt at an original

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Posted 10 March 2012 - 12:11 AM



Hi.
This is my first original.
It has a total of six instruments used, and it's really repetitive and simplistic, but I think this will do for a first original.

The lyrics are really bad, I know...both gramatically and meaningfully. I worked with some people for the grammar but chances are it's still atrocious...
I got frustrated about halfway through as well...

Wishing I could retroactively touch up some stuff, like how I mixed it (her voice is somewhat too soft as it is), or how I could have approached the lyrics, but it's done and I'm satisfied for now.

So.
This is Makune Hachi.
You all already know Makune Hachi but yes this is Makune Hachi and I thought her voice would go well with this song.
Plus Misha is really nice.

Anyway, download for mp3 and karaoke: http://www.mediafire...2jv5oe15hsnuepf
UST is on request only, but if you request it I will probably give it to you. However, request on PM, email, twitter, or skype only, please.
Japanese, romaji, and English lyrics: http://insanelyconfu...ginal%E3%80%91/
So...
Back to USTs for a while.
I think, for another original, until then I'll be thinking about more instruments to use and how to make things more intricate.
I might also experiment with other genres. I like folk, but I like other things too.
Since I finally got one original out, I think at least it's good that I've started something.

Sorry for this really awkward description.
I'll make sure the next one is better.
Hope you enjoy the song.
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Posted 10 March 2012 - 12:18 AM

It sounds good but I think the violin is a bit loud. I would love to learn this on viola.
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Posted 10 March 2012 - 12:18 AM

View Postsleepysheep7, on 09 March 2012 - 04:24 PM, said:

It sounds good but I think the violin is a bit loud. I would love to learn this on viola.


I'll keep this in mind. Thank you for the feedback!
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Posted 21 April 2012 - 05:58 AM

GJ. I really love this style of music. The repetition didn't bother me. I don't speak Japanese so I don't notice anything about the grammar.

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Posted 09 June 2012 - 01:18 PM

Cute♥ At least you made your first original song.
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Posted 19 June 2012 - 02:11 AM

very nice I like her alot! :D

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Posted 17 May 2013 - 02:33 AM

A few of the instruments are a bit too loud, but other then that, this is an amazing song, and I'm in shock that this is your first Original!
Keep it up!

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