[sat]

Hi!

I invite lyrics for my song!!
(I told about it here before.)

Here is a demo song

One has a vocal with temporary words, another one has a musical instrument with a melody of vocal.

Two kinds were prepared so that it might be easy to write the lyrics.

Demo - vocal (words are just a image that is devoid of meaning)
http://soundcloud.co...ords-are-just-a

Demo - only melody
http://soundcloud.co...emo-only-melody

I use Luka in English, so I need English lyrics.

This song may I think that the sound which rhymed suits this music.

I rhymed about a demo song as a example.
It's not adjusted voices yet, you maybe hard to understand the pronunciation...
I wish to feel the thing what I wanna say.

March is full of the term of collection.

If there are two or more applications, I will choose.

Please send a mail to me if you write the lyrics!!

Bye　☆（ゝω・）v


Postscript: As notes, if a melody and the number of words do not fit, it'll be difficult to sing.

I considered demo how it sounds, so its sentence is broken and meaningless.
But I exposes the inputted sentences to reference of the number of words.

Spoiler

May be I lose cont-rol my self

You'll be know (know)
could be more (more)

ri-ding the wave as a game

we were mis-un-der-stan-ding when bells were rin-ging the sign

It's too late (late)
to shut gates (gates)

(Dates just sho-wing up two of us)

time is not brea-king a-ny-more

yes I know (know)
make it slow (slow)

couse it be same at the time

some-thing change in my boom when I will leave at the room

as-king what (what)
gi-ving that (that)

now I have to break my mind
and pride
I blind

I can't make more gains

Do I miss you so much

It's a kid-ding ques-tion too much

(1 and 2 and 3 4
I count the times
For-get-ting day by day
It's bloo-ming like step by step)

No more cry to-night the night
I mean all-right

(no no no. I don't real-ly wor-ry, sorry)

[Same words repeat 1 time because it's a demo]
[After repeating]

(1 and 2 and wa-cha gon-na do?
2 and 4 and we have to do
things be good
time comes soon
I try this drive
those guys on this game)

- means separating notes when I input the words at Vocaloid.
() means track of chorus which are each LR stereo sounds in the Demo track.

[Yuka Kazami]

Hi! I'm having a little trouble understanding Luka's English. Would it be possible for you to post the lyrics here? If you want I can edit them so that they make sense and fit the rhythm.

[Ria]

I'd like to help too...if that's okay, of course.

If not I could help with something else...art? Or something.

[Sena]

Did you have a title in mind, or are we also supplying a title?
Just wondering if you had an idea of a title in mind for us to base the lyrics on, or if it free choice.

[sat]

Yuka Kazami, on 22 March 2012 - 04:23 AM, said:

Hi! I'm having a little trouble understanding Luka's English. Would it be possible for you to post the lyrics here? If you want I can edit them so that they make sense and fit the rhythm.

Sorry, my poor English makes you misunderstand.

Words of Demo song are just a fake. It's your lyric that I want.

Ria said:

I'd like to help too...if that's okay, of course.

If not I could help with something else...art? Or something.

I am glad when it spreads to many people that I am inviting lyrics.

Mugi-Chan said:

Did you have a title in mind, or are we also supplying a title?
Just wondering if you had an idea of a title in mind for us to base the lyrics on, or if it free choice.

A title should be made from lyrics, I think.

[Roimata]

I believe sat is asking for us to create lyrics, which is something I would be happy to help with! Just give me a bit I will see what I can create!

Spoiler

A Moth's Life

Waking up crying and wondering,
When did the heat from your touch go away?
How did it turn into something so cold,
Something so unreal, something so nonexistent.

Could you please stop talking for a while,
My heart is choking on itself now.
All this guilt, so much guilt,
How much will persist until I'm consumed?

One more smile,
Smile one more time.
I'll turn away before you start crying,
So I won't see the damage I've caused.

One more kiss,
Just give me one more kiss.
So I can catch a glimpse,
Of our faded love.

Staring at the bright blue sky,
I wonder how all our dreams could have existed.
The happiness it all contained,
How could it have lifted so quickly?

Just like cascading water,
It dried up into the air.
The intimacy that was once exchanged,
Flew away into the sunset.
Before I could even get a chance,
To protest it.

One more smile,
Smile one more time.
I'll turn away before you start crying,
So I won't see the damage I've caused.

One more kiss,
Just give me one more kiss.
So I can catch a glimpse,
Of our faded love.

Staring into a reflection of me,
I can't help but see all the blood I've shed.
What did you see in me that you treasured so dearly?
How could it have been something I didn't even see?

Grasping for my hand during a walk,
I might as well just be tortured.
Waiting for the perfect time to tell the truth,
Is only making me hate myself more.

Crying endlessly at the night sky,
As I struggle to breathe,
A shooting star dares to give me clarity,
But all is see the blood on my hands.

Screaming, fighting as loudly as I can,
But these protests aren't true,
I just quickly try to utter,
The last true, "I love you."

I titled it a 'A Moth's Life' because a moth usually only lives around 2-4 weeks and in this story their relationship lasted around the same length. You don't have to use the entire thing since my poems can be quite lengthy but you're free to use it.

[newtypefag]

satさんにはどんなテーマがいいでしょうか？

[sat]

newtypefag, on 22 March 2012 - 09:04 AM, said:

satさんにはどんなテーマがいいでしょうか？

テーマは特にありませんが、曲の印象を感じたままに作っていただければ・・・と思います。