Forgive me if this is in the wrong part orz
This is a UST I've been working on for Sakura Drops by Utada Hikaru. I've been working on it on-&-off for about EVER now, & I haven't got too far, but this is what I have. Anything at all is helpful owo
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Sakura Drops UST Critique?
#2
Posted 08 June 2012 - 08:00 PM
/spasms on the floor
YES <3 I LOVE THIS SONG AND HIKKI
/ calms self and fan spasms.
Sorry...Big Utada Hikaru fan. Why is she on a hiatus D:
Now onto the UST. It sounds really good from what I can hear. Though I would choose a different voice, or maybe a duet. He sounds like he's pointlessly screaming at some parts of the song that should sound softer.
I would edit the engrish a bit more as to not soun so choppy, and edit the ntoes with some vibrato here and there for a more realistic touch. Even if it's just slight vibrato.
YES <3 I LOVE THIS SONG AND HIKKI
/ calms self and fan spasms.
Sorry...Big Utada Hikaru fan. Why is she on a hiatus D:
Now onto the UST. It sounds really good from what I can hear. Though I would choose a different voice, or maybe a duet. He sounds like he's pointlessly screaming at some parts of the song that should sound softer.
I would edit the engrish a bit more as to not soun so choppy, and edit the ntoes with some vibrato here and there for a more realistic touch. Even if it's just slight vibrato.
#3
Posted 08 June 2012 - 08:29 PM
Azuru, on 08 June 2012 - 04:09 PM, said:
/spasms on the floor
YES <3 I LOVE THIS SONG AND HIKKI
/ calms self and fan spasms.
Sorry...Big Utada Hikaru fan. Why is she on a hiatus D:
Now onto the UST. It sounds really good from what I can hear. Though I would choose a different voice, or maybe a duet. He sounds like he's pointlessly screaming at some parts of the song that should sound softer.
I would edit the engrish a bit more as to not soun so choppy, and edit the ntoes with some vibrato here and there for a more realistic touch. Even if it's just slight vibrato.
YES <3 I LOVE THIS SONG AND HIKKI
/ calms self and fan spasms.
Sorry...Big Utada Hikaru fan. Why is she on a hiatus D:
Now onto the UST. It sounds really good from what I can hear. Though I would choose a different voice, or maybe a duet. He sounds like he's pointlessly screaming at some parts of the song that should sound softer.
I would edit the engrish a bit more as to not soun so choppy, and edit the ntoes with some vibrato here and there for a more realistic touch. Even if it's just slight vibrato.
owo yay a response~~~~~
Also a huge Hikki fan & I SWEAR THIS SONG NEEDS MORE LOVEE!!
Anyway, yeah this UST is actually tuned for Linako Sonone's VCV lol but I decided to plug in Kire Ritsu for the hell of it...probably not the best choice...but I swear Linako sounds better with it xD
Ahh the Engrish...it's a bit difficult editing that part properly xD. I plan on releasing it in CV & VCV, so I had to put the Engrish in a way that both VCV & CV can say "heartbreak" without it sounding like "hbeqbwjbbjqFK" orz. However I shall work on that a bit more o3o.
Also, there's actually a lot of vibrato xD. I was trying to base it on the original, but I gave it some of my own twists with certain notes. I feel more vibrato might be overkill xP. But this is like extreme WIP lol so revisions galore!
Thank you so much for your input 8D
#4
Posted 16 June 2012 - 01:36 AM
Sorry to bump, but I'd like more than just one response orz & also I fixed up the UST a bit, so here's the newest preview~
Listen on Soundcloud.com
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