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Cream's IA Drawing - Critique me- After 6 months, it is done.

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 12:03 PM

So, yeah, taken me like 6 months to get it perfect! Shading...I don't normally shade as I just can't, but- I think her shading turned out quite well. It's meant to look sketchy as after a while of drawing it I was like "SHE WILL LOOK SKETCHY!" so that's why there are deliberate lines around IA, well, tbh, most of them were actually mistakes, but my rubber is so dirty that I didn't wanna rub it out...
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Urm, there is pen shading due to me deciding to "experiment" - Now, in all honesty, I don't think the pen shading makes it bad? Apologies for the picture- I tried to scan it- ended up photocopying it. So my scanner is broken (it's a scanner/photocopier) so bleghgb but yeah, enjoy.

I plan to draw SeeU or Oliver in the same style next!

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 12:17 PM

It's really nice! good job = u=b I love your coloring! may I ask what you use to color? The proportions are really well done as well.
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Posted 23 September 2012 - 12:22 PM

I mainly used colouring pencils. For the darker shading on her hair and skirt, however, was done using a writing pen. The sections that are black (darker than shirt) are also done using a pen to, like, define them from other parts of her clothing? ^^;
Ah thank you ^^ I've had friends at school tell me I should have done her further up the page, as her shoes go slightly off the page, but that's more positioning rather than proportions. If anything, her shoes are a little too big ; A ; but thank you ^^~
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Posted 23 September 2012 - 02:24 PM

Oh I love it *o* The pen shading is actually quite nice :3

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 05:15 PM

It's really good! Mind if I drew IA for you? Cause I will if you want!

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 05:36 PM

Oooh~ That'd be splendid!
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Posted 28 September 2012 - 01:37 AM

It's not bad. The only issue is hat IA's hair shouldn't be blonde.
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Posted 28 September 2012 - 02:02 AM

It's gorgeous. :IA: <- Gratituous IA emote

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Posted 29 September 2012 - 10:37 PM

The hair's a little off in color to me, but otherwise this looks pretty darn good! :IA:
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Posted 30 September 2012 - 07:54 AM

I'll get right on the IA picture then! *w*

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