[Angel Kiss Hikari]

I'll critique some other UTAU later.
But, I want to know what you guys think of Amilia.
I'm going to work on her ACT2 soon, as soon as school is officially over. (or maybe earlier, if I can find the time and the quietness)
So I'd like critique on her voice the most. (But not on the oto files since I already fixed them but I'm not going to upload it since I'll get her ACT2 out soon... and her a/i/u/e/o sounds, for some reason they're weird and I'm going to fix them in her ACT2)
Thanks in advance! (Oh, and ignore the ugly art, I'm working on a (slightly better) one.

Picture of your UTAU: [link]

Name: Amilia Enne (縁音アミリア)

Age: 15

Height: 1,65 m

Weight: 60 kg

Personality: She acts childish most of the time, and enjoys blowing bubbles and playing on the swings. Amilia is usually quite loud, to the point of annoying other people. She is very afraid of supernatural things. Whenever she sees/hears something scary, she tends to curl up in a corner of the room while covering her ears and closing her eyes. She enjoys spending time with her sister, and is very protective over her.

Backstory: In her past, she was a guyish girl. But, while growing up, she started to act girlier, even though she disliked it. This brought her to a point where she didn't even want to grow up anymore and started doing childish things.

Paired with: She likes stalking Len... but I'm not going to pair them up since no one will like it.

Character Item: Bubble blower stick

Video or Video's of them:


(This is her old art, ignore it!)

Their Voicebank: ACT1

[Gwenhwyfar]

I have to say that I really like her outfit. It's very unique.

\o/ And hooray for not having a Japanese name!!!

Edit: As for her voice, it seems good, though there are times that I have a hard time understanding what she's saying. xD But that's what you get with UTAUs, I guess.

Edit:

@Aërendyll: Well, you can't exactly stop people from coupling your UTAU with a male UTAU. People might take the hint if you make a lot of videos of her with girls..

I think you should allow people to couple her with whoever they want, though. xD That can seem a bit "OMG!1 Yu can't uze mai UTAU widout mai permission." *shot*

[Yotty]

Derp, might as well give it a try.

Picture of your UTAU: Picture

Name: Ironai Yoti 「色ナイ　ヨチ」

Age: Appears 15

Height: 165cm

Weight: 68kg

Personality: She's quite mellow, and she seems to be anti-social because of her being a foreigner. However, she's quick to warm up to and actually quite outgoing. She sometimes teases her friends, but with the intention of raising their confidence-something that she lacks when it comes to singing.

Backstory: She never really stated her real name when she first arrived into the UTAU world, and she took the alias of Ironai Yoti as an attempt to blend into UTAU society[however, she did not know of the japanese naming trend of ending their names with 音] Being of Korean origin, she did not know much Japanese at first. As time went on, she quickly picked up on the language and been able to converse with other UTAU. Being one who thought very lowly of her voice quality, she decided to be multilingual to make up for it. As a result, she had been practicing Korean and Japanese in singing with the others, it was not enough. She soon picked up on bits of Spanish from other Spanish UTAU, a language with similar sounds. Once she had a decent skill on that, she aimed for a big goal: English. It was difficult, and she managed to have a grasp on the language. To this day she is still working on it.

Paired with: [No one]

Character Item: Penguin

Video or Video's of them: Rolling Girl[ACT1]
Poker Face[ACT2WIP]

Their Voicebank: DL

[Aërendyll]

Gwenefar, on 30 June 2010 - 06:20 PM, said:

Edit:

@Aërendyll: Well, you can't exactly stop people from coupling your UTAU with a male UTAU. People might take the hint if you make a lot of videos of her with girls..

I think you should allow people to couple her with whoever they want, though. xD That can seem a bit "OMG!1 Yu can't uze mai UTAU widout mai permission." *shot*

For quite some time I told myself I shouldn't mind people coupling her with whatever UTAU they want, but if I do that she will just end up singing with guys if people pair her at all. And seeing how I'm very fond of anything slash (both yuri and yaoi) that would just make me sad, you know? There's tons of straight girls already - just go and use those if you need a female love interest for your male UTAU. It's not that hard. |: Female love interest for your female UTAU? VERY HARD.

But seriously, I'm not really asking anything outrageous of users from what I know. I just don't want them to use her for anything that's offensive (e.g. pairing her with little children, racism stuff, etc.) or that they pair her with male UTAUs. I know it's stupid when people ask you to first ask permission to use a public voicebank, that you tell them they should only be paired with e.g. Len or Kaito or Miku or whatever or that they should always have awesome art, etc. But I'm not asking that. I'm asking that people don't alter her romantic preference. For all I care you pair her with Acme Iku - I won't get offended over that (in fact - I'd be amused).

Is it really that big of a deal to you to keep just one or two wishes the author has?

[Syekun]

Aërendyll, on 30 June 2010 - 12:05 PM, said:

For all I care you pair her with Acme Iku - I won't get offended over that (in fact - I'd be amused).

^I'm tempted to do that, like right now. xD Any particular song you'd want them to sing? 8D

[Aërendyll]

Yume Barauta, on 30 June 2010 - 07:15 PM, said:

^I'm tempted to do that, like right now. xD Any particular song you'd want them to sing? 8D

Ohoho, someone's into crack? As long as it's not Magnet or Anti The Infinite Holic I don't really mind... *has heard way too much covers of those songs to still enjoy them well*

[Syekun]

Aërendyll, on 30 June 2010 - 01:02 PM, said:

Ohoho, someone's into crack? As long as it's not Magnet or Anti The Infinite Holic I don't really mind... *has heard way too much covers of those songs to still enjoy them well*

Yeah, those two are kinda over used... /end understatement of the century

Hmmmmmm... Since it's a song that makes me smile every time I hear it, and will no doubt be hilarious, I'm gonna make them sing Ladies First. 8D

((Yes, I love crack. LOVE IT.))

[Alice-Human-Sacrifice]

no one has critiqued my UTAU all the info is on the other page

[Amagaku]

AliceHumanSacrifice, on 30 June 2010 - 04:55 AM, said:

Picture of your UTAU:

Name: Arisu Doson

Age: 17

Height: 5"9

Weight: 10 stone

Personality: cute and clumsy,falls over in her skates alot but refuses to take them off

Backstory:she's a want to be singer and actress so this is her big break

Paired with:

Character Item: rollar skates,oreo mikshake and an ipod

Video or Video's of them:

Their Voicebank:
http://www.mediafire.com/?jjzuytyonyd

Well, I dont really like her name, if your going to name a character "arisu" it makes it seem....webawoo-ish. I think you should just have her be 'alice' and be done with it. just my opinion though, still totally up to you.

[Aërendyll]

Posting mine again since I didn't get critique on it earlier. This time in a spoiler to not clog the thread.

Spoiler

Aërendyll, on 30 June 2010 - 01:35 PM, said:

I thought I'd do this with Yuki. ^^

Picture of your UTAU:

Spoiler

Name:
Mahou Yuki
Please don't go complain about her Japanese name. >8| I made her up when the only non-Japanese UTAU I knew was Zanda since it was early 2009 and back then it wasn't a problem. Besides, my other UTAUs (yes, I voiced more) have names that are Egyptian and English. I tried to think up a different name for her, but I couldn't make one up that I found fitting.

Age:
19

Height:
175cm

Weight:
Undetermined
(I love to joke that she's heavy because she's a robot, but I don't see weight as important and thus I don't focus on it.)

Personality:
Cheerful, insecure, shy, loving, caring
Yuki is in general a warm person, but she's also insecure and has has a slight fear of strangers.

Backstory (if you have one, if you dont, leave blank):
It's more of a concept than a backstory, but it's just something I made for myself. I'm not really putting it online here because I don't think it's all that important and I'd rather have people make up stories for her rather than me dictating where she comes from and what her life is like.

Paired with(if none, leave blank):
She has an official crush on Takoe Zuii, but I don't mind any pairings with other UTAUs as long as they are female.

Character Item:
Ace of Spades card, motorcycle (I have the latter drawn somewhere, but it's not uploaded to the internet)

Video or Video's of them:

Faista:


Rolling Girl (ft. Yokune Ruko):


Their Voicebank:
http://www.mediafire...3f0d18f178a9cfa

[Gwenhwyfar]

Aërendyll, on 30 June 2010 - 01:02 PM, said:

Ohoho, someone's into crack? As long as it's not Magnet or Anti The Infinite Holic I don't really mind... *has heard way too much covers of those songs to still enjoy them well*

xD Anti The Infinite Holic is a love couple song? It just sounds like two people singing some doom song..

Edit: o3o; I just deleted something from here.

Bah, forget I said anything about being loose to allow others to couple her with a guy.

[Alice-Human-Sacrifice]

well i translated my name to jap,ill think about just making it alice and disscuss it with my artist/voicebank maker

[k.e.]

Not to be a troll, but does anyone wanna critique my UTAU...? o3o

[Aërendyll]

k.e., on 30 June 2010 - 11:40 PM, said:

Not to be a troll, but does anyone wanna critique my UTAU...? o3o

I think either people are busy or not sure what to say... My UTAU didn't get critiqued yet either. ^^;

[Amagaku]

Aërendyll, on 30 June 2010 - 02:41 PM, said:

I think either people are busy or not sure what to say... My UTAU didn't get critiqued yet either. ^^;

Sorry about that, but I think both of your UTAU's are fine, its probably just because no one find any problems with them (p.s I <3 Yuki :DD)