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UTAU critique - Get your UTAU critiqued here! a place for people to see what other's think of their UTAU.

#766 User is offline   Seiho Icon

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Posted 28 December 2011 - 02:59 PM

View PostKibbles (o*・ω・), on 27 December 2011 - 05:39 PM, said:

remaking my bank with HQ mic heres a sample Listen on Soundcloud.com
i know it is a bit nasal xD but i might rerecord.. made this bank in 2 hours with both recording and oto xD


Love the quality! Other than some unclear consonants, I like your VB (it's so soothing). :D

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Updated RUNE's oto and VB, so I hope it sounds a little bit smoother...

Here's a sample:
Listen on Soundcloud.com

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Posted 28 December 2011 - 10:20 PM

View PostSeiho, on 28 December 2011 - 08:05 AM, said:

Love the quality! Other than some unclear consonants, I like your VB (it's so soothing). :D

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Updated RUNE's oto and VB, so I hope it sounds a little bit smoother...

Here's a sample:
Listen on Soundcloud.com

The voicebank is good, except for the akwardness on the low notes.
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Posted 29 December 2011 - 08:10 AM

Picture of your UTAU:(spoiler'd for huge)

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Name: ROUGE (or Rouge)

Age: unspecified (Teenager?)

Height: Possibly 5'5"-5'5"

Weight: unspecified (Probably heavy due to androidness)

Personality: I normally just do whatever, but for those who like that sort of thing,Normally sweet and friendly (And somewhat childish), but cracks if someone she loves is threatened.

Backstory (if you have one, if you dont, leave blank): Her canon creator is named Nigel. Also, she has a bunch of android siblings (Aka my other UTAU).

Paired with(if none, leave blank): In a crackfic, a nerdy vampire named Josh. Regularly, no one.

Character Item: none

Video or Video's of them: English VB:




Japanese VB:



(There's lots of filters on her in this though.)

Their Voicebank: http://www.mediafire...4qfg8wfvzq4346m

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View PostR.F.C.Lanuza, on 27 December 2011 - 02:51 AM, said:

Please Critique my Utauloid's Append. it would be really nice if I can read you opinions about these banks~

Adult Append
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Hyper Append
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Whisper Append
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Melancholy Append


Thank you very much in Advance


Adult: Some of the consonants aren't very clear, but I like the smoothness. Also, maybe try a little lower? He doesn't sounds very adult (Kind of teenish, though that may be the song)

Hyper Append: Could use some oto tweaking in my opinion. He's kind of hard to understand at points. He's also a little screechy at points (I have this problem with my own though).


Whisper Append: Pretty nice, but I feel like maybe he's a little too breathy or something? The robotic edge and the end of the notes seems to disrupt the otherwise nice flow.


Melancholy Append: Very robotic on the higher notes, was that your intention? The rs sounds fine though. (As they do for all of them, I'm just saying as that's kind of important)

Also: I like his coat C:
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Posted 31 December 2011 - 07:41 AM

Listen on Soundcloud.com

A while ago I shared a demo of Nashi singing Meltdown. I hope her OTO had gotten better; I had help from VocaloidFanPerson on Youtube.

I hope she sounds better! Critique appreciated.
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Posted 01 January 2012 - 10:28 PM

I'm not very good at critiquing... so I'll try doing that later... anyway, here's my latest UTAU

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Name: Koyori Moecchine (Moecchine Koyori if you prefer to put her surname first. One of my friends named her actually)

Age: somewhere around 15/16-ish

Height: 5' 5"

Weight: Not sure, I tried asking her but she started getting mad and chased me around town (LOL)

Personality: Bitchy, violent, rude, and she doesn't enjoy talking to people very much.

Backstory:

Paired with:

Character Item: A glass of chocolate milk... either that or a pair of socks

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Their Voicebank: http://www.mediafire...r3lj6ppqe4520dw

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Posted 02 January 2012 - 12:33 AM

The UTAU sounds promising Just and Octopus but you really need work on that oto.

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Posted 02 January 2012 - 12:45 AM

@ Just an Octopus, It needs an oto, to begin with.

Secondly, the r's are mispronounced

Also it sounds like its all peaked/clipped. If you recorded it in Audacity, Audacity has a very low threshold for clipping. Turn down the mic volume to counteract this. You may also wanna record a bit further away from the mic.

As for the voice itself, its hard to tell since its all distorted from the clipping.
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Posted 02 January 2012 - 10:33 AM

View Post梨の花, on 31 December 2011 - 03:47 PM, said:

Listen on Soundcloud.com

A while ago I shared a demo of Nashi singing Meltdown. I hope her OTO had gotten better; I had help from VocaloidFanPerson on Youtube.

I hope she sounds better! Critique appreciated.


She sounds very smooth! And the quality and her voice are both good; I love her VB! :D

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Updated RUNE's oto again, and then made 3 samples:

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(I made the UST for this one, so it may sound a bit different...)

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Hope she's sounding better...

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Posted 06 January 2012 - 09:37 PM

Um, Here's my UTAU Hakumei. The design in the tyre is not his final. I've yet to finish designing that. Just rest assured its completely different O .o! Besides his hair and headphones.



Name: Hahen, Hakumei. Hakumei being his first name

Age: 16

Height: 5' 8

Weight: 130

Personality: He has a somewhat neutral personality. Calm at most times, but when he does experience emotion, it's normally a great deal at once.

Backstory: I have one, I'm just too lazy to post it right now :D!

Paired with: No one, he's a loner.

Character Item: He really doesn't have one. Feel free to give him one. But for now he's symbolized by + - and circuitry. :D.

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Posted 07 January 2012 - 09:52 PM

View PostHa-kumei, on 06 January 2012 - 10:43 PM, said:

Um, Here's my UTAU Hakumei. The design in the tyre is not his final. I've yet to finish designing that. Just rest assured its completely different O .o! Besides his hair and headphones.



Name: Hahen, Hakumei. Hakumei being his first name

Age: 16

Height: 5' 8

Weight: 130

Personality: He has a somewhat neutral personality. Calm at most times, but when he does experience emotion, it's normally a great deal at once.

Backstory: I have one, I'm just too lazy to post it right now :D!

Paired with: No one, he's a loner.

Character Item: He really doesn't have one. Feel free to give him one. But for now he's symbolized by + - and circuitry. :D.


The mixing is really good :D God, I love this song x)

He has an accent on r & u :)
The r doesn't really stand out, but the u does P:
Try to smile when you record the u :) It will sound more japanese xd
And there are a lot of tutorials of how to pronounce the japanese r x)
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Posted 07 January 2012 - 11:01 PM

I love that song too > ~ < It's my favorite. AVTechNO! Is amazing. :]. And alright. I will! How did you feel about his voice?

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Posted 07 January 2012 - 11:13 PM

It sounds good, not too deep and not strange xd
Even the otos are good xD
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Posted 08 January 2012 - 07:08 AM

View PostHa-kumei, on 06 January 2012 - 01:43 PM, said:

Um, Here's my UTAU Hakumei. The design in the tyre is not his final. I've yet to finish designing that. Just rest assured its completely different O .o! Besides his hair and headphones.



Name: Hahen, Hakumei. Hakumei being his first name

Age: 16

Height: 5' 8

Weight: 130

Personality: He has a somewhat neutral personality. Calm at most times, but when he does experience emotion, it's normally a great deal at once.

Backstory: I have one, I'm just too lazy to post it right now :D!

Paired with: No one, he's a loner.

Character Item: He really doesn't have one. Feel free to give him one. But for now he's symbolized by + - and circuitry. :D.


Pretty good, though I'd have to argue with Cheesecake slightly on the mixing, I feel like he could be a bit louder when the music picks up, he can be a little muffled during those parts. The otos and accent are decent, though.
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Posted 09 January 2012 - 11:32 AM

Picture of your UTAU: [here]

Name: Lilrow

Age: 21

Height:6'1"

Weight: 72kg

Personality: None, apart from the fact that he's vegan.

Video or Video's of them:


Their Voicebank: http://www.mediafire...13yo85qwbm3oao4
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Posted 09 January 2012 - 06:20 PM

Picture of your UTAU:
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Name: Saki (咲希)

Age: 17

Height: 5' 4"

Weight: 112 lbs.

Personality: Has no set personality, and the user can choose what they want her to be.

Character Item: Haven't thought of one yet.

Video or Video's of them:


Their Voicebank: Version 1 CV Voicebank

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