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UTAU critique - Get your UTAU critiqued here! a place for people to see what other's think of their UTAU.

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 07:57 PM

View PostSakki, on 11 April 2012 - 01:41 PM, said:


Okay my turn: Pleae note that is is still a work in progress.
But this is my latest SDRloid, SDRloid 03 Yanguchi Kiroko. Offical art and profile coming soon.

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edits: added critques and changed demo song


If you're still going to be working on it, then it should be fine when you're done. For now it sounds a bit choppy, but I think you should be able to fix it easily.

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 09:03 PM

View PostSakki, on 11 April 2012 - 12:41 PM, said:

@ninjamitsuki Your male UTAU needs are redesign. The UTAUloid comminty does not endorce color edits of existing characters. I belive I told you thise before. Taking the trainer for Pokemon Gold/SLiver/Heart Gold/Soul Sliver and changing the color of his hair does not make a design; it makes a possible law suit.



I have redesigned him. He is not a recolor anymore. Though it might be hard to notice due to my lack of detail in the drawing, when I drew him I designed as I went and created the design from scratch, but I'm willing to make more major changes if necessary. I know since he started as an edit it might be hard to notice changes and it could seem like I'm just changing Gold instead of making my own character, but I am indeed working on
making him unique (but not TOO unique, I want him to have design cliches of shonen heroes on purpose)


The hat will not change though, I can change the design of the hat itself but it will still be a baseball cap with hair sticking out.
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Posted 16 April 2012 - 06:10 AM

Picture of your UTAU: None, thanks to the lack of tablet pen, I can't finish the coloring/shading.

Name: Roxanne Cee

Age: 15

Height:170cm

Weight:65kg

Personality: Cheerful.

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Their Voicebank: My link (Note: has old oto's)

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Posted 17 April 2012 - 07:09 AM

Uh, here is Daisuke colored in:

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 09:48 AM

critique this plz: I mean really gaiz, i want substantial feedback on the quality and tone, my pronounciation is average so I don't care, i just need an opinion on the actual voice because it truly annoys me and i need to know if it's workable. If not I'll trash it, this was just a bank i made while I was bored

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 01:52 AM

View Postninjamitsuki, on 17 April 2012 - 04:15 AM, said:

Uh, here is Daisuke colored in:

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Oh! Oh! *waves hand frantically* May I make a fan art of Daisuke? It won't be the best in the whole world, But I like his design ^^

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 03:49 AM

View PostStuffisCool3bah, on 20 April 2012 - 05:54 AM, said:

critique this plz: I mean really gaiz, i want substantial feedback on the quality and tone, my pronounciation is average so I don't care, i just need an opinion on the actual voice because it truly annoys me and i need to know if it's workable. If not I'll trash it, this was just a bank i made while I was bored

pic: uh.........

Name: Dolly Llama/Llama Garl

Age: old lady trying to sound cute <--bahahaha

Weight: I don't speak in kilos.....so 85 pounds

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Backstory: a girl that is.....a llama

Paired with: Goat boy

Character Item: idk atm

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I think it sounds great. Really nothing to complain about. I don't know much about the technical side of UTAU, but I think it's at least Macne level, if not better.

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 11:01 AM


ALMOST DONE!!!
sorry if the consonants arwe strong... it's my mixing


ALMOST DONE!!!
sorry if the consonants arwe strong... it's my mixing
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Posted 21 April 2012 - 01:39 PM

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 01:39 PM

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hey you, kibbles....dat voice....it's very soft, it suits the song very well. Kudos. It's good quality, no horrible pronounciation or oto issues. But I feel like ur UTAU lacks an efficient range, the song has a repetitive melody and I was wondering if you had any other demos showcasing the range. :D It's pretty good for now, but the voice type might limit you to songs of a similar genre. I await more of ur work



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Posted 21 April 2012 - 09:16 PM

Hello, I'd like a UTAU critique ; 3 ; Every piece of advice is helpful~! Thank you and don't be harsh on meee please ; 3 ;



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Posted 22 April 2012 - 07:56 AM


i got this, accidently rendered with tips... might have some issues...
also i know it might limit him, which is why i already am recording a VCV bank which got a stonger more fresh sound to it~

but he also was created for this genre :3
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Posted 22 April 2012 - 03:31 PM

Critique tiem!

View PostNarct, on 21 April 2012 - 05:22 PM, said:

Hello, I'd like a UTAU critique ; 3 ; Every piece of advice is helpful~! Thank you and don't be harsh on meee please ; 3 ;



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Oooo he sounds really nice! The quality & pronunciation is pretty good! The only thing is that he's really really slurry, & this is probably an OTO problem, so I'd get that fix. But still you did a great job with this bank~


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i got this, accidently rendered with tips... might have some issues...
also i know it might limit him, which is why i already am recording a VCV bank which got a stonger more fresh sound to it~

but he also was created for this genre :3

...I found this cover on Youtube & I was like HNNNNNGGGG. He sounds like Bikuta in Chase's original cover of the song. That's a compliment, cos Bikuta is a sexy, sexy bank. Those breaths are a bit much though, not gonna lie.
He sounds pretty decent with TIPS actually o3o but still wouldn't be his preferred resampler cos it gives your 't', 'k', & 'tsu' sounds an extra puff of air on the consonants, which screws up pronunciation a bit but also sounds pretty ergh...
But um yeah. Sexy bak you got yourself here. I'll be looking forward to that VCV bank~
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Posted 22 April 2012 - 05:08 PM

View PostStormy♬, on 22 April 2012 - 06:37 PM, said:

Critique tiem!


Oooo he sounds really nice! The quality & pronunciation is pretty good! The only thing is that he's really really slurry, & this is probably an OTO problem, so I'd get that fix. But still you did a great job with this bank~



...I found this cover on Youtube & I was like HNNNNNGGGG. He sounds like Bikuta in Chase's original cover of the song. That's a compliment, cos Bikuta is a sexy, sexy bank. Those breaths are a bit much though, not gonna lie.
He sounds pretty decent with TIPS actually o3o but still wouldn't be his preferred resampler cos it gives your 't', 'k', & 'tsu' sounds an extra puff of air on the consonants, which screws up pronunciation a bit but also sounds pretty ergh...
But um yeah. Sexy bak you got yourself here. I'll be looking forward to that VCV bank~

Thanks!! yeah the breath might have been a bit too much OTL... and i prefer using him in freesamp, TIPS sounds nice on him, but tends to screq up some things, like those you mentioned
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Posted 22 April 2012 - 09:30 PM

My first UTAU. More of a test than an actual voicebank. I loathe the voice anyway, sounds so boring. <_< NOTE: The beginning of the demo is off a bit. skip to the next part. Also, it's a WIP, the OTO.ini is pretty much finished, but I may tweak it a bit since I got better at OTOing halfway through the list. EDIT: also, I recorded it with my 3DS. For something like that I think it came out pretty good, but some samples may have suffered from it.

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